Here's the improved version of my title page. Last time I got a comment about it not being obvious as to what the game's about, thing is that's kind of the point. As the game goes on you're going to be piecing together why you're involved in the protagonist's life to begin with and what you need to do. The setting of the title screen should be slightly obvious after the game is finished, with either ending.
animations are well done with the paper, clip board, title, menu and mouse icon. the font you selected goes well with the hand written nature of the elements on the table. the font color doesnt follow the color palettes you established last week. i know that the last name at the end is important as the paper returns but it gets lost with the rest of the names. maybe an ink spatter as if the name was written quickly would call notice to it. also you need to remove the word vertification from your blog. talk to me if you need help with that.
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